pros and cons on being home schooled........?

Ninfa Asby: This is a great essay, if I would add anything it would be changing the last sentence to: 'Like I said, its your choice, do you want to be home schooled?' This leaves your audience thinking and makes your work more memorable. I won the student of the year award at my public school, you have got me hooked and curious as to what my education would be like if I were home schooled. The only other thing to change would be the length of your essay. some paragraphs were short while others were long. Also this was slightly disorganized, try and use more 'stand out' adjectives, it would make your writing more colorful. The final thing is: is this a speech or essay? It sounds like a combanation. I would give this a "B" or "B+" for grade 8/9 level.Good Work....Show more

Chanda Wittwer: My granddaughter is being abode schooled. She is 9 now. She stored having temper tantrums in college. She is fairly mind-blowing and needed to do issues her very own way. there have ! been issues at abode, as properly, that made her sense uncontrolled of her existence. it is her 2d twelve months of being abode schooled. Her mom is doing maximum of it and additionally employed tutors. She is in a position to gallop forward incredibly speedy with issues that she is interested in. she will persist along with her very own interest, do specific initiatives. whether, whilst she isn't interested in something, it incredibly is a splash greater good to get her to do issues, than, it may be for the prevalent newborn to sit down down in a lecture room alongside with all and sundry else, whilst they are all doing it, too. of path, socially, it incredibly is thoroughly distinctive. My daughter has gotten my granddaughter in touch interior the "abode education community" She has some large acquaintances, who're unusual, like her, and that they have got exciting mutually. final evening she had a snooze-over with considered one of them. you do not say why you would be a! bode schooled, so i won't be able to make any guesses approxim! ately execs and cons for YOU!! sturdy success!...Show more